New Outline

Group New Outline:

- Girl is scavenging around Junkyard


- She comes across a car and opens the door before crawling in


- She pulls up her pant leg to reveal a bloody wound


- She then rips off one of her long sleeves and puts one of her hot wiring tools in her mouth


- She ties the sleeve around the wound and tightens it, wincing in pain


- She then sits for a few seconds before deciding to try to hotwire the car (more detail in independent research task)


- She grows frustrated as this fails


- We gradually hear a very quiet buzzing sound from the distance


- And then the sound disappears, everything returns to silence


- She then goes back to connecting the wires, quietly this time


- The sound then returns, much louder this time, it grows even louder to reveal it as the revving of a motorcycle


- She gets an intense look of pure horror on her face and sits fully paralysed for a few seconds


- Just as the revving suddenly gets significantly closer, she gets it together and throws herself out of the car


- She sprints as fast as she possibly can, limping in pain, over to a run-down looking shack


- She jumps inside and slams the door shut


- She quickly crouches down with her back against the door, her hands pressed against her ears and her eyes shut tight


- The sounds of the motorcycle quickly approach the shack


- The sounds slow in pace as they reach the doorway from the outside


- The motorcycle starts to circle around the shack


- The girl jolts from shock and follows the sound with her head as it passes by every wall


- The sound then suddenly drowns out and somewhat disappears


- She sits completely shivering for a few seconds and cautiously takes her hands off her ears


- She quietly lifts herself up and turns around to creak the door open


- She peeks outside and scans her surroundings before fully opening the door to reveal an empty scene


- She steps back inside and leans against the wall, she sighs in relief


- All of a sudden a battleaxe crashes into the shot right beside her


- She jumps back and screams


- The killer then pulls the axe back out of the ground and holds it above his shoulder, ready to swing it back around to kill her


- We then look in from outside the open door, we hear her screaming as she falls to the floor of the doorway